EROTIC STORY REVIEWS
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Judging by the emails I've received, a young girl seduced by an old man is very popular storyline. The girl could be in her teens, a schoolgirl, and the man is the next door neighbour. The girl visits his house for some reason and he gazes at her slender legs, her naked thighs below her short gymslip or plaid skirt. He looks at her school blouse billowed by her teenie breasts and starts thinking about her naked body. The scene is set, the old man lusts after the young schoolgirl, and the erotic story begins. An excellent example of young school girl and perverted old man sex is Ray Gordon's Devious Deception. The story is available in illustrated text format, or as a free audio story. Audio erotic stories have become popular over the years. But, as with free erotic stories, good ones are hard to find. I've listened to many free audio erotic stories and most have left me cold. It wasn't so much that the stories were bad, but the accent of the narrators was dreadful. With all due respect, the female American accent is far from erotic. I suppose I'm biased, but I love the sweet little English girl accent, or a male reader. People have asked for my thoughts on language, expletives, in particular. I don't like the narrative littered with expletives such as fuck and cunt, but I do think these words can make the dialog more realistic. A girl might be murmuring... 'Yes, yes, fuck my cunt hard. Give me your beautiful cock and spunk in my mouth.' Bear in mind that the narrative is the author writing, and I don't think it's necessary for him or her to write... 'The girl opened her legs and peeled apart her dripping wet cunt lips in readiness to be fucked and spunked by her lover's hard cock.' The author should be subtle with the narrative, and the characters can say what they like in the dialog. |
Erotic story reviews web site ratings and sex content listings here. School teacher and naked schoolgirl stories with headmistress and lesbian school girl sex fiction. |